在考生写作之前,审题是必须要操作的步骤,而且也是关乎作文分数最为关键的一环。下面是小编搜集整理的关于雅思小作文跑题怎么办的资料,欢迎查阅。
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要点一:涵盖题目所有要求
在写这篇文章时,考生如果只是简单的罗列堆砌,不做任何的分析、概括和比较,扣分就难以避免了。所以说还是要提醒大家注意要明确雅思写作要求,多总结雅思写作题目。
因此,考生在复习备考阶段不要盲目地练写文章,要多训练提高信息归类和概括能力。
要点二:结构清楚合理
结构清楚,从文章整体来说是讲一篇文章起码要有开头、中间和结尾,每个中间段要有一句主题句总整段,下面依次展开,后有一句话收尾。结构合理则是指文章的论证结构合理,特别是作文,立场要非常清晰。
在写文章时,考生首先就要鲜明地提出自己的观点,之后在过渡段里提及与自己意见不同的论点,说明理由是什么,其后放主要的笔墨论证自己的观点,可以结合亲身经历或了解到的实例来证明观点的正确性,后进行总结陈述,进一步确认自己观点和意见。
在备考雅思时,考生要注意文章结构的建立,力求做到结构清楚、论证比例合理。
要点三:词汇运用丰富、灵活
新评分标准大的改变是把老评分标准的第三方面“词汇和语法”分解成词汇和语法两个细则。这样一来,词汇和语法、任务完成或任务反应、连贯与衔接在评分时的权重是一样的。所以,要获得雅思作文,同时也要在词汇上狠下功夫才行。
在词汇的准备方面,要注意宽度和难度两方面的训练。词汇的宽度是指在一篇要求字数的文章内,能用不同的语言表达同一个内容,避免重复。词汇的难度,是指在文章中是选用比较幼稚的词汇,还是有一定文体标准、适合于学术场景表达的词汇。
2雅思大作文主体段写作技巧
一:举实例
思维短路,举实例!提出一个观点,举实例!提出一个方案,举实例!而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式,任何情况下,只要我们无法继续文章,不管三七二十一,尽管举例子!
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更多句型:
To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…, for example
二:做比较
方法:写完一个要点,比较与之相似的;又写完一个要点,再比较与之相反的;
世界上没有同样的指纹,没有相同的树叶,文章亦同,只有通过比较,你才会发现二者的相同点(through comparison)和不同点(through contrast)。下面是一些短语:
相似的比较:
in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner
相反的比较:
on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …, …
三:换言之
没话说了,可以换一句话再说,让你的文章在多一些字,或者文邹邹地说,是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。
实际就是重复重复再重复!下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you!
I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you.
I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love with you.
或者上面我们举过的例子:
I cannot bear it.
可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.
因此可以这样说:I cannot bear it. That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it.
更多短语:
in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more simply.
3雅思写作常见的语法错误
1. 双谓语错句
. For those under 26, there were 80% students study for career.
There be句型属于双谓语错句高发句型,因为句中的be动词已经是谓语,而句子后面的动词通常是定语从句中的成分,故不能作为主句中的谓语。例句中同时出现了“were”和“study”,根据上面的分析,were应该是谓语,而study for career应该是定语从句,因此,例句应修正改成:
For those under 26, there were 80% students who studied for career. 或者For those under 26, there were 80% students studying for career.
又如:Causes for this phenomenon are comprehensive but the major reasons contribute to this problem can be identified from three perspectives.应改成:
Causes for this phenomenon are comprehensive but the major reasons contributing/which contribute to this problem can be identified from three perspectives.
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2. 句子不完整
. The most popular kind of transport was by road.
句中主语是the most popular kind of transport,谓语动词(系动词)是was, 而by road按照语法应该是方式状语,此句缺乏表语。应改成:
The most popular kind of transport was road.
又如:Many factories in order to get more profits, which made waste water and waste gas.
去除目的状语“in order to get more profits”和非限制性定语从句“which made waste water and waste gas”, 剩下的是many factories, 不能作为一个句子。根据此句想表达的意思,应改为:
Many factories in order to get more profits made waste water and waste gas.
3. 主系表结构使用错误
. We are impossible to make any progress without correcting the mistakes.
此句的主干结构是:we are impossible“我们是不可能”,表意不对。这种表达在英语中对应的句型是:It is…for…to…, 所以应该改成:
It is impossible for us to make any progress without correcting the mistakes.
类似的错误例句还有:People are very convenient to get information on the Internet. His profession is a teacher.
4雅思写作中的常用连接词有哪些
第一、And 并列关系
(and)in addition/and/similarly/likewise/as well as/besides/furthermore/also/moreover/too/not only … but/even/besides this/that
第二、Sequence 顺序 (then)
出现的时候表示列举
first/initially/second etc./to begin with/then/next/earlier/later/following this/that/afterwards
第三、Consequence 结果 (so)
前面是后面的结果/也就是这些词后面就开始给出结论了
as a result/thus/so/therefore/consequently/it follows that/thereby/eventually/in that case/admittedly
第四、Contrast 转折 (but )
表对前面论述的转折/一般后面才是作者观点
however/on the other hand/despite/in spite of/though/although/but/on the contrary/otherwise/yet/instead of/rather/whereas/nonetheless/in contrast
第五、Certainty 确定 (of course)
强烈的确定/后面是作者的坚定论点
obviously/certainly/plainly/of course/undoubtedly
第六、Condition 条件/ 因为 (if )
后面跟随着某种情况发生的前提或者是条件。
if/unless/whether/provided that/Given that /for/so that/whether/depending on
第七、Time 时间 (when)
before/since/as/until/meanwhile/at the moment/when/whenever/as soon as/just as
第八、Summary 总结 (in a word)
作者的最后总结
in conclusion/in summary/lastly/finally/to sum up/to conclude/to recapitulate 重述/in short/in a word
第九、Example 举例 (for example)
for example/for instance/just as/in particular/such as/namely 也就是
第十、Reason 原因 (because)
since/as/so/because (of)/due to/owing to/the reason why/in other words/leads to/cause